2012年12月英语四级考试作文点评:运用模板

　　2012年12月22日，在世界本应该“末日”之后的第一天，九百多万中国的年轻人，在这寒冷冬天的清晨，迈进了四、六级考场，开始了他们对于“末日”的又一场“战争”!

　　然而这场战争，并不那么容易取得胜利，很多人在看到作文题目的那一瞬间，他们的心都停止了，都粉碎了——只因为，曾几何时，他们过于相信某些人类的相关“押题”，导致的是自己根本没有实际的动脑并且动手去写上些作文，去掌握些句子，去运用写段落!

　　而，我在考前的最后提高公开课程中，明确说过，不要“押题”，押不中失常，押上了，但是没背，只能崩溃!

　　我也说过，希望大家明白“任你几路来，我只一路去”的写作王道，即不论出题人怎么变化，我们都只写自己的作文，让他琢磨去吧。我们也要注意今年的作文题目，在此，笔者使用自己之前在网上已经公布的作文模版来实际书写一下这次四级作文的题目，以验证我所说的写作“王道”。

　　在对比过程之中，红色为现场添加，蓝色为主题或图片内容，黑色为原有内容。

　　写作一步一定项审题：

　　主题：Education Pays

　　第一段：引入现象

　　As we can see from the picture that nowadays, the phenomenon of Education Pays has aroused wide concern among the people who care about the young people’s future. Especially to the young generation living in the big cities, they tend to put the pays to the first place but not the degree, ignoring the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat to their present career and may even endanger futures. 第二段第一种：现象原因

　　Ample reasons can account for the issue of Education Pays，the following one might be the most critical .For the majority of young people, they have been always considering the education as a bothering thing to do or not a opportunity that can add color to the dull routine of every day life.So,they want to get a job as early as possible.But, as matter of fact, as the picture described, the people who have learned more earn more than others And,in the picture, the ones who have the doctoral degree earn more XXXX than the ones who have only a degree as bachelor.

　　第二段第二种：现象讨论

　　Does anyone maintain the same attitude towards this issue?Definitely noxt，as a matter of fact，opinions vary from person to person. Some argue that Education Pays is beneficial to doctors, because, by this way,they can earn mare money. However ，quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that Education Pays is detrimental to the ones who learn the skills through hard works.But,most of people agree that the demerits of less education far outweigh its merits

　　第三段：个人对策

　　To my way of thinking, the issue mentioned above will bound to generate more consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. We should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen supervision over it.And，it is high time that all of us ,parents，educators，and the authorities, make combined efforts to tell the young people the fact about the Education Pays. With this measure taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future.