2015年6月英语四级真题答案完整版(试卷二)

　　写作答案

　　Using Computer Wisely

　　The comic reflects the image of our modern world in which technology has been an inseparable part of people’s daily life. As is shown, the man in the picture uses a laptop at work and home, for business and entertainment, so obsessed that he even dreams about bending over his laptop.

　　It is undeniable that this has been a common scene and the overuse of computers has aroused great concern. In my opinion, people should be cautious of the excessive use of computers for the following reasons. In the first place, it will inevitably affect people’s health if they sit before computers and stare at the screens for long hours, which may result in muscle pain and visual impair. Secondly, playing computers alone isolates people from others. Relationships in the real world are maintained through human contact and spending time with each other instead of chitchatting online. In summary, people should cut down their computer use for health and social reasons. Computers are not controllers but tools in our life.

　　写作点评

　　Using Computer Wisely

　　本题由一幅连环画 “This Modern Life: Work Home Play Life” 引出话题，探讨电脑在现代生活当中扮演的重要角色。很明显，本题主旨在于评述现代生活中电脑的过度使用这一现象，此话题与生活息息相关。本题难度适中，考生均有话可说，且与2013年曾经出现的互联网系列考题相类似。

　　考生要做的首先是仔细审题、确立观点。按照题干要求，第一段——Start your essay with a brief description of the picture。因此，第一段：总述图画反映的问题(The comic reflects the image of our modern world in which technology has been an inseparable part of people’s daily life.) + 具体描述画面内容(As is shown, the man in the picture uses a laptop at work and home, for business and entertainment, so obsessed that he even dreams about bending over his laptop.) = 引出下一段

　　第二段——Comment on this kind of modern life。确立观点(It is undeniable that this has been a common scene and the overuse of computers has aroused great concern. In my opinion, people should be cautious of the excessive use of computers for the following reasons.) + 两方面原因(In the first place, it will inevitably affect people’s health if they sit before computers and stare at the screens for long hours, which may result in muscle pain and visual impair. Secondly, playing computers alone isolates people from others. Relationships in the real world are maintained through human contact and spending time with each other instead of chitchatting online.)+ 总结观点、提出建议(In summary, people should cut down their computer use for health and social reasons. Computers are not controllers but tools in our life.)

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