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2017年12月英语四级高分范文(九)

2017-08-01 17:05:44来源:网络

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Witness of a Theft Incident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

  1)描述你在公共场所目睹的一次扒窃事件2)谴责这种不文明的现象

  【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求描述一次事件的经过,提纲第2点要求对事件进行评论,由此可判断本文应为记叙文。根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:交待事件背景;描述扒窃事件的经过和最后结果;谴责这种不文明的现象,提出解决建议。

  【参考范文】A Witness of a Theft Incident

  Yesterday, I witnessed a theft incident on my way home. The thief was so rampant that it left me a very deep impression。

  It was in the rush hour, when many people were buying tickets at the subway station. A woman took her purse out and paid for the ticket. Then she put her purse back into her bag and turned to leave, when a mid-aged man brushed past her muttering “Excuse me”. She didn’t feel unusual and went into the station. Indeed, her purse had been stolen by that man. To our surprise, the thief seems not to be nervous at all and even began to look others up and down. Maybe he was searching for the next target. At that time some persons, including me, witnessed the process. But unfortunately, no one dared to warn that woman。

  This incident makes me ashamed and leaves me a deep thought. The pickpocket has posed a great threat to residents’ and visitors’ property safety. Undoubtedly, it is an urgent thing to take action to prevent pickpocket. However, it cannot depend on the police only. Instead, it needs our common efforts. We can not shut our eyes and mouths to the pickpocket any more. It should be kept in our minds that our forces are far beyond those thieves。

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